LI: To write a different ending for a story

SC: To introduce a new character and use adjectives and speech.

Ryan the fierce searched in the dark woods trying to find his friend Jack. Jack was also a tiger. He was only two years old with strong teeth and a shiny golden striped coat. Ryan heard a noise coming from behind a big grey rock. As Ryan moved closer, he saw  Jack had his paw stuck in a trap. ‘Help me dear friend” “he moaned. Suddenly Ryan saw a tall hunter in a green jacket approaching them.Ryan pulled and bit the rope that was attached to Jack's paw.There was a loud roar as Ryan made a final tug to set Jack free.The two tigers raced off thru the forest back to their cave.They feasted on juicy deer steaks and then went to the nearby river for a drink. They were safe and licked their huge paws before they went to sleep.

Zombie

li: TO USE A HOOK IN THE BEGINNING TO GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER AND CORRECT IDEAS IN SEQUENCE.

stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..

a beautiful sight thought Mata.  Thump!thump!

What!”said mata.Suddenly he felt the hairs on his neck stand up. He

shivered and felt as if someone was  

watching him. Bang!clunk!click!the sound of heavy metal could be heard.

A DISFIGURED MAN STOOD IN THE DOORWAY HOLDING A MACHETE , READY TO ATTACK MATA

A SCREECHING SOUND COULD BE HEARD FROM WITHIN THE HOUSE . MATA SCREAMED AS HE WAS  DISMEMBERED BY THE DISFIGURED MAN. BLOOD AND GUTS AND BODY PARTS WERE ALL OVER THE FLOOR. POOR MATA THAT WAS THE END OF HIM.

“HEY WAKE UP.....” YELLED SAM AND MATA FELT HIS WARM GRIP ON HIS ARM. “OH I HAD THE WORST NIGHTMARE EVER!” EXCLAIMED  MATA. “GO ON TELL ME ALL ABOUT IT OVER BREAKFAST” LAUGHED SAM.

LI: To write a recount
SC:I need to include the 5ws, adjectives, speech and at least 1 similie


write a recount:

Think about the 5 ws :
* When ?
* Where ?
* Who ?
* Why ?
* What ?



 



THE Zoo keeper’s friend

First a smertly dressed European man came into the lion cub enclosure. He is a vet and a friend of the zoo keeper. His name is Jimmy.  Then he came to give some special drops of medicine mixed in milk to the lion cub who was sick. Soon it felt better. Next it began to play with it’s brothers.
Finally, Jimmy the kind vet played with the cubs out in the warm sunshine. Tt felt as  hot asan oven.

We all thought that it was a great day for visitors.A day to remember humans and animals playing together.

Hi everyone
This is a picture of Harold the giraffe.
He is from the Life Education Trust.
I learnt about making choices.
It's not okay to smoke cigarettes or drink alcohol.

Swimming with intructors

L.I; to use adjectives
Sc I have used adjectives to describe

Last Tuesday we were happy and excited for our swimming lesson with 3 talented instructors.  They were kind and friendly.
I used the blue and flutter board.
they were wet and slippery
I liked the cool water.

Mangila
Happy,kind and helpful
Lover of food and family gatherings
Who feels scared when watching a horror movie
Who wonders what would happen if we had a famine in our country
Who fears spiders and crawling insects
Who would like to meet Billy Slater from the Melbourne Storm league team
Who is able to play on my netbook
Who dreams of being a professional league player.

 Hi my name is Mangila and this is my work on Fraction Games      

The maths game shown is the Monkey Game.I enjoyed playing this game .

Click on the link to playhttp://www.maths-games.org/time-games.html