Following our 'Tread Lightly Caravan' experience the students of Room 7 decided to make a pledge.

Personal Recount Writing

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Make a copy of the template and write a recount of your most exciting holiday activity. Save your writing to your writing folder. After conferencing with the teacher, upload your work to your blog.

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Title Tread light caravan

Orientation: who, what, where? Room 7 went into the hall for their turn to look at the Tread lightly Caravan on Monday the 20th of May 2013.I was enjoy in my tread lightly caravan

Events: what happened?we play geckos and vines First.....we had to roll the dice if you get 5 you take 5 step and when they ask the question Then.....you have to roll the dice again if you on the finish you win. Next.....we have to move to another activities.we went to the microscope which.we went to pedal power. Finally.....we went to lunch and eat. we went home.

Conclusion: I thought that........geckos and vines game was snake and ladders

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During the school holidays I went to rugby training. We played against Manukau Rovers rugby team and won.	Dad and I watched the Senior rugby teams play after my game. The match was between University and Pakuranga .	I received the player of the day trophy.I felt like I was six feet tall.
My dad took me to kfc to celebrate . I was looking forward to eating a big meal.	My family and I were so full from eating KFC we decided to go for a car ride to Mission Bay.	Our day ended with Dad driving us home. I was tired and fell asleep on the way back .

On Sunday I went to Mothers Day at church .Everyone wore their nice clothes. All the Mums looked beautiful all dressed up. The church choir sang a special song for all the Mums . I gave my Mum a necklace. My Mum was so happy when I gave her the necklace .She had a happy Mothers Day . We went to KFC and after that we went to McDonalds  .  We went home our tummies full from eating too much food.

in the holidays i went to rugby  training on tuesday and thursday and i had a game on saturday.  we won the games and i got the player of the day.we went to mcdonalds and my dad ate the whole burger. we went home .