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li: TO USE A HOOK IN THE BEGINNING TO GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER AND CORRECT IDEAS IN SEQUENCE.

stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..

a beautiful sight thought Mata.  Thump!thump!

What!”said mata.Suddenly he felt the hairs on his neck stand up. He

shivered and felt as if someone was  

watching him. Bang!clunk!click!the sound of heavy metal could be heard.

A DISFIGURED MAN STOOD IN THE DOORWAY HOLDING A MACHETE , READY TO ATTACK MATA

A SCREECHING SOUND COULD BE HEARD FROM WITHIN THE HOUSE . MATA SCREAMED AS HE WAS  DISMEMBERED BY THE DISFIGURED MAN. BLOOD AND GUTS AND BODY PARTS WERE ALL OVER THE FLOOR. POOR MATA THAT WAS THE END OF HIM.

“HEY WAKE UP.....” YELLED SAM AND MATA FELT HIS WARM GRIP ON HIS ARM. “OH I HAD THE WORST NIGHTMARE EVER!” EXCLAIMED  MATA. “GO ON TELL ME ALL ABOUT IT OVER BREAKFAST” LAUGHED SAM.

LI: To write a recount
SC:I need to include the 5ws, adjectives, speech and at least 1 similie


write a recount:

Think about the 5 ws :
* When ?
* Where ?
* Who ?
* Why ?
* What ?



 



THE Zoo keeper’s friend

First a smertly dressed European man came into the lion cub enclosure. He is a vet and a friend of the zoo keeper. His name is Jimmy.  Then he came to give some special drops of medicine mixed in milk to the lion cub who was sick. Soon it felt better. Next it began to play with it’s brothers.
Finally, Jimmy the kind vet played with the cubs out in the warm sunshine. Tt felt as  hot asan oven.

We all thought that it was a great day for visitors.A day to remember humans and animals playing together.