li: TO USE A HOOK IN THE BEGINNING TO GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER AND CORRECT IDEAS IN SEQUENCE.
stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..stars twinkled like a million fairy lights..
a beautiful sight thought Mata. Thump!thump!
What!”said mata.Suddenly he felt the hairs on his neck stand up. He
shivered and felt as if someone was
watching him. Bang!clunk!click!the sound of heavy metal could be heard.
A DISFIGURED MAN STOOD IN THE DOORWAY HOLDING A MACHETE , READY TO ATTACK MATA
A SCREECHING SOUND COULD BE HEARD FROM WITHIN THE HOUSE . MATA SCREAMED AS HE WAS DISMEMBERED BY THE DISFIGURED MAN. BLOOD AND GUTS AND BODY PARTS WERE ALL OVER THE FLOOR. POOR MATA THAT WAS THE END OF HIM.
“HEY WAKE UP.....” YELLED SAM AND MATA FELT HIS WARM GRIP ON HIS ARM. “OH I HAD THE WORST NIGHTMARE EVER!” EXCLAIMED MATA. “GO ON TELL ME ALL ABOUT IT OVER BREAKFAST” LAUGHED SAM.
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